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01 August 2010 @ 05:16 pm
It had to be written  
This GIF demanded it be written.
SPOILERY FOR THE SECOND EPISODE BEWARE PEOPLE
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Title: Close your eyes
Author: ruyu
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): Sherlock/John
Warning(s): KISSING
A/N: It had to be written. My first Sherlock writings, be nice.

Available in Russian: Закрой глаза on A03 by the lovely Rainy_Elliot


John turns in frustration from the wall, the stupid bloody wall which was moments ago covered in symbols. The symbols that they needed to crack the case. Sherlock must think him a complete fool.

"It was here, not ten minutes ago, I swear."

"They didn't want me to see it."

"But it was just..."

Sherlock turns to him and grabs his face gently, but urgently. "John, close your eyes."

"Why?" The damp leather of Sherlock's gloves is cold against his face.

"Close them," Sherlock insists.

John, strangely terrified, closes his eyes for his colleague. Sherlock moves closer to him, caressing his face as he speaks gently to him like a small animal being lead to slaughter. "The human visual recall is only 62%. What can you remember now?"

"Everthing." John finds it difficult to breath as Sherlock spins them around, pulling him closer, practically dancing with each other.

"And the symbols?"

In John's mind, just behind his eyes, Sherlock is flush against him, pressing his lips against his throat, speaking into his skin, breathing heat back into him.

"The symbols, John?" Sherlock reminds him with a sharp pull as they spin.

"Yes, yes."

"That pattern? Do you remember the pattern, John?" Sherlock's grip on his biceps tightens.

His flatmate is ridiculously close and warm and holding him, even if it's only to help him remember, but Sherlock doesn't realize that what he is doing is not helping John in the slightest.

"Sherlock...let me..." John whispers, leaning closer and grabbing Sherlock's arms for support. They slow and finally stop, still attached to each other, breathing strained and hot in the cool night. He wants to tell the man that he took a photo of the wall, but that would only mean they would let go of each other and John doesn't want that just yet. Sherlocks eyes are wide and demanding and John only wants to please him the best he can, so he steps away from him. "Sherlock, let me get to my pockets."

Sherlock steps away and watches him, confusion and hidden desperation on his face.

John retrieves his phone and shows it to his colleague. "See, I took a photo."

Sherlock takes the phone and looks at it in shock and then back at John. "Jesus, John." Then Sherlock pulls him back into his arms and kisses him, leather gloves back on his face keeping John's lips again his. John can hear the phone fall to the rocks of railway yard and he can hear the sharp intake of breath from Sherlock as he moves a hand to John's back and pulls him impossibly close.

John smiles into the kiss, thankful that for once he's done something right.

Sherlock loosens his hold and pulls a fraction away, enough to keep their noses together. "See, John. You're getting better at this detective business."

"I suppose I am." Sherlock smiles and grabs his hand and kneels down to pick up John's cellphone and together they run back down the tracks into the impossibly dark night.

 
 
 
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Ruyuruyu on August 1st, 2010 10:27 pm (UTC)
You're very welcome. XD
45¢ and an Almond Joyconjure_lass on August 1st, 2010 11:03 pm (UTC)
This show. I almost never watch televison on the internet, but i've made a point of watching this. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. I hope they put it out on Region 1 DVD. *DROOLS*

I haven't seen this episode yet, but i'm now muuuuch more interested. *hugs you*
Ruyuruyu on August 1st, 2010 11:22 pm (UTC)
The 2nd episode was the highlight of my day! XD I hope you can find the time to watch it soon. XD *hugs back*
EMSmithsemsmiths on August 2nd, 2010 12:44 am (UTC)
You are impossibly fabulous.
That episode was broadcast... less ...than ...4 ...hours... ago.

How you produced such a wonderful fic in such a short time is beyond me.
But I’m so thankful that you did :)
Ruyuruyu on August 2nd, 2010 01:58 am (UTC)
LOL. What can I say, the episode was truly inspiring. XD
I'm glad you liked it!
a falling star fell from your heart: SHERLOCK (sh) wink20thcenturygrl on August 2nd, 2010 01:07 am (UTC)
This is pure loveliness and so what should have happened. Love it ♥!
Ruyuruyu on August 2nd, 2010 02:00 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! XD
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Ruyuruyu on August 2nd, 2010 03:37 am (UTC)
I SQUEED so loud when Sherlock grabbed John's face! I'm was like, "OMG HE'S GONNA KISS HIM!" I was sorely disappointed when he didn't. ^^

I glad you liked it! XD
Magic: An extremely sexually attractive necktruthliesmagic on August 2nd, 2010 03:26 am (UTC)
As soon as I saw this scene, I hoped that someone would write fic for it, and this is absolutely brilliant! Precisely what should have happened in this scene.

Really, though, it was begging for something like this. I refuse to believe that scenes like this are accidental.
Ruyuruyu on August 2nd, 2010 03:40 am (UTC)
This scene was fanservice and nothing else. I'm positive about that. XD I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw it.

Anyway, thanks for commenting! I'm very glad you liked it! <3 <3
captivebird: Yes!captivebird on August 2nd, 2010 09:03 am (UTC)
The scene works so much better this way... :-))
Ruyuruyu on August 2nd, 2010 03:30 pm (UTC)
But of course! Thanks for reading!
littlemissstars: sherlock b&wlittlemissstars on August 2nd, 2010 09:59 am (UTC)
This is what we all wanted =P Well done!
Ruyuruyu on August 2nd, 2010 03:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you! XD
Queen of the Dirty Look: fangirlsmadrona_8 on August 2nd, 2010 04:29 pm (UTC)
Okay, so I haven't seen this. Yet, oh yes, it was great!
Okay, this is not the first time a fanfic has gotten me to watch something.
Ruyuruyu on August 2nd, 2010 09:33 pm (UTC)
YOUR ICON=WIN! XD

I know exactly what you mean. I've entered fandoms bases on fiction rather than reading the canon first. ^^
ribbonspooncat: joribbonspooncat on August 2nd, 2010 10:10 pm (UTC)
I saw the episode, read this, and you made that scene even more intense than it really was, especially with this : "but that would only mean they would let go of each other and John doesn't want that just yet."
Lovely :)
Ruyuruyu on August 3rd, 2010 04:16 am (UTC)
Thank you. XD
laura_trekkie: Holmes BBClaura_trekkie on August 11th, 2010 07:21 pm (UTC)
With that kind of motivation it's no wonder John's getting better at the detective business! :)

Laura.
Ruyuruyu on August 12th, 2010 12:35 am (UTC)
Lol. I'm sure John would agree with you on that. XD
Thanks for reading, my dear.
Spinning Jenny Valentine (寶欣): Dance danceda_cursednlucky on August 20th, 2010 04:15 am (UTC)
...can I somehow morph this scene into canon? Seriously, this is how it should have gone down. Hahaha.
Nana: Fanficnana_70 on August 29th, 2010 07:53 pm (UTC)
Everyone shouted "KISS HIM" for this moment, Sherlock didn't heard us D'8...
Thank you to wrote this fic ! This is lovely ! <3
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